Care"Till...?" Richard rasped out a sigh, slumping back into the pillows in his room of their shared flat with a feverish groan.
I can safely say this is an adorable Tillchard fanfiction. You had great description though it was more of Till's caretaking than Richard feeling ill, but the overall pampering that Richard gets from Till makes up for that.
The light banter that goes between the two is cute, and I like how Richard compares stage Till to home Till. The reader is able to see how sharply the two contrast, gives Till a realistic feel as a man.
I will say the story was quite similar to the inspiration, but you can only write about someone being sick and being taken care of so many different ways. Besides that, it was truly a fluffy Tillchard and for that I am happy.
I look forward to more fanfics from you.